Official Vocaloid Fan Club

[Hikaru Kazuki]

The timing of your singing in the fandub is really off...

I have a whole list of things I could say about the dub from what I got in the first 20 seconds, but I'd just get shot repeatedly >.>

[video=youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VUhQ4N90ngM[/video]

Yay Valshe in Tokyo Rock City :3

[Dai Kurohana]

First 20 seconds?

It gets progressively better, listen to it at least a BIT more >>;; (and by that hopefully until the end?)


And

It's not off at all, I sung as the EXACT same time as Valshe.


I can take criticism tho.

[Hikaru Kazuki]

You need to learn how to sustain a pitch...
The way you're singing makes it feel like it's incredibly off-beat.
And you're trying too hard in hitting some of the notes; just pick a certain range and stick with it.
That scream scared the shiznits outta me >.>

[Dai Kurohana]

XDD

I actually know why the pitch varies

I was singing normally in the first half

Then I decided "I WILL SING LIEK KAITOH" so I did

Then I sustained that for a while

Then went a bit weird at the end.


And well... I wanted to deliver high notes with emotion o:

Tho I agree with you on the offbeat thing

It really catches a nice rhythm from the beginning first chorus on to the end of the second one, around.


AND IT SCARES ME TO.

XD